Couple Ads I made for my GM Internship - Page 2

Neurorad · 02-16-2007, 06:53 PM

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Originally Posted by BuckJon

This reminds me of the intro scenes to The Naked Gun movies

L O L O L O L O L O L O L E N R I C O P A L L A Z Z O S A V E D T H E Q U E E N !

Edit: Good job, Nikki. Nice work.

findtom · 02-16-2007, 06:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Nikki

Yeah, the issue is that besides the photos of the cars which are provided by Chevy, I can only use photos I have taken myself unless I purchase photos from a site like getty images. The magnifying glass image I didn't take but if we decide to use that ad I can always go out and take a photo of a magnifying glass no problem. I am searching through my photos for better landmarks but most of them are all sunsets and beaches lol.

If it's for a school project I really don't think anybody is going to sue you. Try flickr or pbase. If you want to officially licence royalty free photos istockphoto.com is better than $$$ sites like corbis or getty.

Nice ads btw... the first one is great. If I were to change one thing it would be the font and drop shadow used around the magnifying glass in the second one.

BlueLion · 02-16-2007, 06:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Neurorad

L O L O L O L O L O L O L E N R I C O P A L L A Z Z O S A V E D T H E Q U E E N !

Edit: Good job, Nikki. Nice work.

oh no its spreading.....

Off Topic: how come bad ideas catch on faster than the good ones

DLJJ3399 · 02-16-2007, 07:15 PM

I like the concept and the ad.

Question for you? Why did you pick a font that's crayon and looks as if a child wrote it?

I thought the Cobalt was more of a singles car. IMO

mosport70 · 02-16-2007, 07:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Nikki

What do you guys think? :P

I really like the concept.

The image with the green mountains is not great (power lines, other clutter)..May be another canyon/mountain shot (grand canyon, zion/moab, alaska glacier, etc).

My 4-year old gave it an "AWESOME" when she first saw the photos. Unfortunately, she is probably not the target demographic.

Nice work.

Nikki · 02-16-2007, 07:49 PM

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Originally Posted by mosport70

I really like the concept.

The image with the green mountains is not great (power lines, other clutter)..May be another canyon/mountain shot (grand canyon, zion/moab, alaska glacier, etc).

My 4-year old gave it an "AWESOME" when she first saw the photos. Unfortunately, she is probably not the target demographic.

Nice work.

haha, yeah i need to use my own images so i will hunt through for better photos if the ad is approved.

just4kickz · 02-16-2007, 07:51 PM

add some flash and make it fade.. in and out...

cm3rc · 02-16-2007, 09:54 PM

nice job!

Nikki · 02-16-2007, 09:55 PM

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Originally Posted by just4kickz

add some flash and make it fade.. in and out...

these are going to be flyers, not online.

beauderek · 02-16-2007, 10:02 PM

I think it's a great ad. Probably better than many ad execs that get paid the big bucks. I cannot believe how awful the Superbowl ads were this year.

Nikki · 02-16-2007, 10:58 PM

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Originally Posted by markl323

No hot chics in bikini no good grade.

F

Actually if I were to improve it I would:

1) Make the cars smaller so people can see/appreciate the things behind them.

2) Instead of having the same pic of the back of the car in 4 screens, use 4 pics of different angles.

3) Use only one "An american revolution"

4) Put the magnifying glass in the middle.

Other than that, looks good.

1) ok
2) I can only use the images they provided me
3) There is only one
4) i don't how can it be positioned in the middle without lots of white space on the left- i will give it a try though

ksfrogman · 02-16-2007, 11:05 PM

Nikki, what tool did you use to select the car image? Did you freehand select, smart select, or something else?

Nikki · 02-16-2007, 11:06 PM

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Originally Posted by ksfrogman

Nikki, what tool did you use to select the car image? Did you freehand select, smart select, or something else?

magic wand

Carnage · 02-16-2007, 11:08 PM

very nice job!

ksfrogman · 02-16-2007, 11:08 PM

I must be using the magic wand wrong. It oftentimes selects other things I don't want to select.

Nikki · 02-16-2007, 11:21 PM

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Originally Posted by ksfrogman

I must be using the magic wand wrong. It oftentimes selects other things I don't want to select.

you have to adjust the tolerance level.

Nikki · 02-17-2007, 07:41 PM

OK they want to go with an orange theme, so I have no control over that. But here is a flyer for the event that I made and also the front and rear version of 5x7" glossy cards that will be distributed.

I feel so proud now that this is almost becoming real, I've never designed anything like this, I'm so excited! Yeay for my resume! haha.

Corey · 02-17-2007, 07:43 PM

Awesome work Nikki

Nikki · 02-17-2007, 08:03 PM

Hmm, I forgot to put the white on the back of the card like the flyer. Does this look more consistent?
Also I think the red font on the cards looks better but the white on the flyer stands out better. Should I keep them different or make them both the same?

Nikki · 02-17-2007, 08:22 PM

Oh and here is the updated t-shirts I made--yes I know they're orange.

Apparently their goal is to make us all look like pumpkins.

BNR32 · 02-17-2007, 08:23 PM

^^^

Thats awesome work there! very nice

Nikki · 02-18-2007, 12:32 AM

worked on the back of the card some more and also the flyer

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ksfrogman Major General Drives: E90 330i 6MT Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Torrance, CA Posts: 6,749 iTrader: (12) Garage List 2006 330i [0.00] 2006 330i [0.00]	Nikki, what tool did you use to select the car image? Did you freehand select, smart select, or something else? __________________

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Carnage Lieutenant General Drives: people insane Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: classified Posts: 16,404 iTrader: (2)	very nice job!

02-17-2007, 07:41 PM	#39
Nikki Major General Drives: del Sol VTEC Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Malibu Posts: 6,368 iTrader: (9)	OK they want to go with an orange theme, so I have no control over that. But here is a flyer for the event that I made and also the front and rear version of 5x7" glossy cards that will be distributed. I feel so proud now that this is almost becoming real, I've never designed anything like this, I'm so excited! Yeay for my resume! haha. Attached Images __________________ Nikki

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Corey Private First Class Drives: '92 240SX Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Boston Posts: 163 iTrader: (0)	Awesome work Nikki __________________ "You're going to have your heart broken, and you're gonna repair it with zipties."

02-17-2007, 08:03 PM	#41
Nikki Major General Drives: del Sol VTEC Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Malibu Posts: 6,368 iTrader: (9)	Hmm, I forgot to put the white on the back of the card like the flyer. Does this look more consistent? Also I think the red font on the cards looks better but the white on the flyer stands out better. Should I keep them different or make them both the same? Attached Images __________________ Nikki Last edited by Nikki; 02-17-2007 at 08:28 PM.

02-17-2007, 08:22 PM	#42
Nikki Major General Drives: del Sol VTEC Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Malibu Posts: 6,368 iTrader: (9)	Oh and here is the updated t-shirts I made--yes I know they're orange. Apparently their goal is to make us all look like pumpkins. Attached Images __________________ Nikki

02-17-2007, 08:23 PM	#43
BNR32 Lieutenant Colonel Drives: Bicycle Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: British Columbia Posts: 1,721 iTrader: (0)	^^^ Thats awesome work there! very nice

02-18-2007, 12:32 AM	#44
Nikki Major General Drives: del Sol VTEC Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Malibu Posts: 6,368 iTrader: (9)	worked on the back of the card some more and also the flyer Attached Images __________________ Nikki Last edited by Nikki; 02-18-2007 at 01:30 AM.

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