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Originally Posted by Weebl

You should bring up your black points, watch out where you crop off her arms/body parts and if you use F2.8 like you did, you have to nail the focus on her eye(s). Most of the shots should have had more depth of field just to get the sharpness.
Not bad, she looks like she enjoyed modeling for you so go for it again.

Points noted, thanks!