i don't like the smoking one, if the picture were of her right side more, less of her face would be blocked by her hand and it would open her up better.
it just feels like it's you walked out the back door and shot someone having a smoke without setting up much. If you cropped it closer and did it in black and white maybe it might say more, but just the way it is now, it doesn't speak to me like the others do.
I do like all the others, I like Rodi's suggestion too. There are many levels to vices though, so I like seeing your lighter interpretation, and can't wait to see other interpretations over time.